[Sussex] website

[Steve Dobson]

Gareth/Tom

On 10 November 2002 at 16:22 Tom Ellis wrote:
> On 10 Nov 2002 at 15:14, Gareth Ablett wrote:
> > decided to upload somthing need to add more content though but 
> > the basics of before are there.
> > 
> > http://www.sussex.lug.org.uk/
> 
> All we need now is some content! :)

Gareth: I like the new style much, much better that the old.
Having said how much I like it (and I really do) can you make the
following corrections [my English, as my posting to this ML 
prove, isn't that good, but some things just cause me pain]

  1:  Remove the space after/before the open/close brackets.
      "( Linux User Group )" should be "(Linux User Group)".
      A girlfriend at school taught me the rules for typing
      she was learning and...

  2: "dont" should have an apostrophe,

  3: "horsham" should have a capital letter like "England" and
     "Sussex".

  4: I think the start second of the paragraph needs work.  I
     don't like that "chatty" style.  I believe that a informal
     but correct English prose presents a better image. [You
     can blame my mum for that one].

  5: There are other typos - please correct - ispell is your 
     friend :-)

> May i suggest we have a user interface so memebers can login 
> and update parts of the site... or even just an admin interface
> (if there isnt one already) where we can upload meetings and
> then say what happened? 

Before we do that I think the "Meetings" page need to be created.
There is a link to it of the front page so it needs content.

Also I think we should say that you need to subscribe to the ML to
find out where the meetings will be.  I think we've had as many
meeting not in the Jug as we have had in them.
 
> I guess the blank space on the front page is for a logo? Who 
> can design a decent logo? 

I think our logo should be a slug using a laptop (with Tux looking
over his shoulder?).  I found the slug/laptop image but it is 
copyrighted, haven't had the time to come up with a logo.
 
> good stuff

Agreed - I do like it.  My criticism here is to make it better.

Steve D