[Sussex] New Flyer for the BCF

[steve at dobson.org]

David

On Wed, Apr 13, 2005 at 02:08:14PM +0100, David Chapman wrote:
> Me first.
>  An OS allow you to run other
>  	An OS allows you to run other

Corrected.
 
>  in most PC bought today.
>  	in most PC's bought today.

I think you mean "in most PCs bought today."  The "'" denotes ownership
not multiple instances.

My mod made.
 
> other can made changes and improvements that befit  everyone. 
> 	others can make changes and improvements that benefit  everyone. 

Corrected.
 
>  Linux are in devices as small as a
> 	 Linux is in devices as small as a

Corrected.
 
> CDROM drive and boot of it you try out Linux without installing
> 	CDROM drive and boot off it you try out Linux without installing

Corrected to:  CDROM drive and boot off it you _can_ try out Linux without
               installing

> Yes!  But be warned, Knoppix
> "this line looks like it says"
>  Yes!  But be wamed, Knoppix
> "this might just be OOo"

Good point changed to "be careful"

New version back up on:

   http://www.sussex.lug.org.uk/flyer.sxw

Steve
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