[Sussex] BBC and Microsoft sign agreement

[John Crowhurst]

On Sat, September 30, 2006 11:36, Andrew Guard wrote:
> I have started a online petition about this.
>
> http://petitiononline.com/BBCMS/

A quick grammar critique:
Change "technology's" to "technologies"

Expand the other operating systems to include BSD, OSX, Solaris perhaps?

"open sourced" to "open source", "patented free" to "patent free", "free
licence patents with have not restrictions upon there use" to "free
licence patents that have no restrictions upon their use"

Other than that, it looks great!

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John