[Glastonbury] ibm advert

[Maurice Onmaplate]

It would have more impact if it was written in prope
English.

for example ..

most unique - it's either unique or not, most unique
is meaningless.

"It's unprecedented integration." 

How can it be "unprecedented integration".  It may
have it, but it is not.  


--- steve at fractalsoup.org wrote:
>
http://www-3.ibm.com/e-business/doc/content/lp/prodigy.html
> 
> i don't know if people have seen this one.
> 
> just wait until they say the last word ....
> its not what you say its the way that you say it?
> 
> anyway ~ i will be using this with the students at
> school
> looking at advertising.
> 
> comments?
> 
> steve l_c
> 
> 
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