[Wolves] can someone please proof read this.
wayne at machx.co.uk
Sun Dec 4 14:44:02 GMT 2005
David Morley wrote:
>I have set up my basic front page I know not all is correct code base
>wise but I want to check the content first. I want to know if there
>are any mistakes with grammer or spelling. if so get back to me
>please. link is http://184.108.40.206
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Seems ok spellingwise apart from
"This section is more of tour"
insert an 'a'
Capatalise 'Linux' on first line . 'Office' later. Maybe put Office in
bold or quotes to show it is a program name rather than an office.
Grammar could maybe made a little more 'editorial' rather than flat
(too many long sentences) , but I'm the worst for grammar - love long
interspersed with hyphens - so I shouldn't really comment! ;-)
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