[Wolves] can someone please proof read this.
wayne at machx.co.uk
Sun Dec 4 14:48:20 GMT 2005
David Morley wrote:
>I have set up my basic front page I know not all is correct code base
>wise but I want to check the content first. I want to know if there
>are any mistakes with grammer or spelling. if so get back to me
>please. link is http://220.127.116.11
>Seek That Thy Might Know
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And if I was being picky I'd change:
"This section covers the most used tools in the Linux world and what
they are most commonly used for."
to something like
" most common tools ..... their useful functions"
just to get rid of 'used' twice in the same sentence, your original is a
bit like 'Editing tools are great for editing'.
Sorry, rest is absolutely fine and having to scrape the barrel to find
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